You could be forgiven for thinking that this is the Post Script to yesterday’s entry – after all, this is a story of only eight words, more like an afterthought than an actual creative composition.
However, telling a story with as few words as possible is a definite art form: several newspapers and magazines regularly run competitions where entrants have to write a story on a given theme, using only 50 words or fewer. As a teacher, I’ve given the same challenge to students in the past: it’s a good way to decide what’s really important in a story.
So, below is my eight words entry, followed by some of the examples of 50 words stories you can find online. Authors have been credited.
My short story entry
The Divorce: their life ended; her life began.
Examples of 50 words stories from other writers
The Scottish Book Trust has some fantastic entries from children and teenagers – here are a few prizewinning stories:
Theme: your story must include a piano
All-age category winner by Lisa Holland:
The boogie-woogie was driving her crazy.
Every night, downstairs, her brother would practise those songs on the old piano.
Every night, upstairs, the music would keep her awake.
Until the day she crept downstairs in her pyjamas, and smashed the lid on his fingers.
Now his knuckles had the blues.
Theme: your story must include a bike ride
All-age category winner by Giancarlo Rinaldi:
“Look mum, one hand!” cried Luca, excitedly, the first time he cycled past the family home. Then, the second time around, he shouted with even greater delight: “Look mum, no hands!” But, on the third passing, it was the bicycle that spoke. “Look mum,” it said. “No Luca!”
Theme: your story must include time travel
Young Writers (12-18) category winning fictional story by Ashley Willis, age 16:
Travelling back in time to kiss your tiny palm clinging to life. I’m shredding you out of your skin of wires, machines and pushing you on a swing, healthy giggles erupting the sky. Your life isn’t marked on a stone rotting from rain and tears. In the past you breathe.
It would be interesting to see if any of these talented children become professional writers in the future.